【2018.01.28 托福TOEFL寫作機經真題與範文分享】

【2018.01.28 托福TOEFL寫作機經真題與範文分享】

綜合寫作

閱讀：葡萄牙人大概1520年左右就到了澳大利亞，而不是1606年那麼晚。

（一）歐洲發現的1550年左右的地圖上面，就有澳大利亞部分地區的名字，很可能葡萄牙商人早在這個時期就到了澳大利亞。

（二）歐洲一本1593年的書中提到了有袋動物（marsupial--kangaroo），由於袋鼠是很典型的澳大利亞動物，所以很可能1606年以前澳洲就被歐洲人發現了。

（三）澳洲一處考古地點，發現了歐洲的鑰匙，土壤分析顯示年代可以追溯到1500s。

聽力：教授針對閱讀三點逐段來駁。

（一）那些地區名字相同，但地圖所繪製的澳洲大陸形狀並不準確，很可能是繪製地圖的人受水手的second-hand stories影響，而非來自第一手資料。

（二）有袋動物不光澳大利亞有，南北美都有，所以書中描述的或許是美洲的袋鼠。

（三）後來對金屬鑰匙的升級的檢測發現，那些土壤不能用來推測鑰匙掉落的時間。

範文：

 The reading suggests that some Portuguese sailors have visited Australia as early as 1520s. However, this proposal is put into question by the experts in the lecture, for three reasons.

First, the reading mentioned that maps of Australia with Portuguese names on them have been made by professional map makers. However, according to the lecture, the landmass in the maps shapes differently than Australia. It is highly likely these maps are not based on direct observations, but on second hand stories from Australian sailors, who pick up the stories from Asian sailors.

Second, the reading points out that pictures of marsupials have been found in the European books. However, the lecture says that the marsupials are native to not only Australia, but North and South America too. The marsupials in these books could have come from America, where the Europeans have already been in the 1500s.

Third, the reading cites a soil sample analysis as evidence that that the keys in an Australian archaeological site dates back to 1500s . However, the lecture presents us with a new analysis with improved methods that contradicts the previous finding. When reanalyzing the soil samples, experts found it to be impossible to use the soil to date the keys.

獨立寫作

The government has enough money to fund to improve younger children’s education. Which one of the following is the most effective?

1. hire more teachers so that each class can have a smaller number of students

2. develop preschool education before kindergarten / primary school

3. provide teachers with additional training so that they can adopt the latest teaching methods

本次綜合寫作以及獨立寫作難度中等。

選擇二：1.學前教育很有必要可以幫助孩子塑造良好的性格（擴展思路：父母的繁忙，孩子性格培養的重要性）；2.學前教育可以有助於培養和提高孩子各方面的能力，為以後的學習工作做鋪墊（解決問題的能力，獨立思考的能力，與人相處的能力） 3.讓步：其他兩種也很有必要：僱傭更多老師可以全方位得更專注地教育孩子；提高老師專業能力可以幫助他們改進教學方法； 然而，教育的主體從來都是學生，而學前教育恰恰是一個人一生中最重要的性格、能力塑造和培養階段，所以普及學前教育才能從根本上讓學生甚至整個社會受益。

Key sentences:

1. Preschool education can help to mold children』s character.

2. Preschool education can benefit the cultivation of some basic abilities for children.

   3. Certainly, hiring more teachers can be beneficial to    children』s better and well-rounded development for    the individual teacher』s more attention and concentr    ation on students ; providing training classes can enha    nce teachers』 professional skills that be conducive to    students both mentally and intellectually.

key words & phrase

continuing education, a sound educational system, with regard to, be the foundation of one』s future and academic life, endure the overwhelming weight and height of iys superstructure

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